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Ryan  
#1 Posted : 30 April 2017 03:36:17(UTC)
Ryan

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These:

Caressing the marble and stone
Love that was special for one
The waste in the fever I (and?) heat
How I wish you were here with me now

Body that curls in and dies
And shares that awful daylight
Warm like a dog 'round your feet
How I wish you were here with me now

Hangman looks round as he waits
Cord stretches tight then it breaks
Someday we will die in your dreams
How I wish you were here with me now


Or these? -

Caressing the marble and stone
Love that was special for one
The waste and the fever and hate
How I wish you were here with me now

The body that kills and hides
Matches an awful delight
Warm like a dog 'round your feet
How I wish you were here with me now

The hangman looks 'round as he waits
Gullet stretches tight and it breaks
Someday we will die in your dreams
How I wish we were here with you now
"Watching love grow, forever. Letting me know, forever."
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ROCKET MICK on 09/05/2017(UTC)
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Johnny James  
#2 Posted : 01 May 2017 04:30:56(UTC)
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Both seem to be wrong in different ways
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ROCKET MICK on 09/05/2017(UTC)
Ryan  
#3 Posted : 03 May 2017 23:45:37(UTC)
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Could you please transcribe the correct ones?
"Watching love grow, forever. Letting me know, forever."
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ROCKET MICK on 09/05/2017(UTC)
Michael Monkhouse  
#4 Posted : 05 May 2017 02:48:44(UTC)
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They're both shit, at least by Ian's standards.
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ROCKET MICK on 09/05/2017(UTC)
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